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  • Writer's pictureAnna Browning

Rhoda

Updated: Jun 3, 2022

You are on a beach somewhere

Dressed to the nines in the 1930s.

Your dress has a Chinese collar and your hair is curled

Just so – like Clara Bow.

Your skirts are hitched up out of the sea's reach

Revealing dimpled knees - daring.


Behind you, my grandfather sits in a deckchair watching:

Suit, waistcoat, tie, hat, his good brown shoes.

The corners of his mouth turn upwards

Under his Buster Keaton hat.


I remember the coal fire and cigarette smell of him,

The red creases on the back of his neck in the car,

His magic trick sixpence from behind my ear.


You served tea at four with fondant fancies and

When we asked for a story, you recited a rhyme from

Your own childhood: Three Little Foxes.


I wonder who took the picture that day on the sands:

How deep they waded out

To capture this moment before the tide came in.







First Draft

You are on a beach somewhere

Dressed to the nines in the 1930s.

Your dress has a Chinese collar and your hair is curled

Just so – like Clara Bow.

Your skirts are hitched up out of reach of the waves

Revealing dimpled knees - daring.


Behind you, my grandfather sits in a deckchair watching:

Suit, waistcoat, tie, hat, his good brown shoes.


I wonder who is taking the picture

How deep they waded out

While you laughed at them.


Later, there would be hard times

But in this moment, you are nineteen

A new bride, without a care in the world.




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